Well, on the whole, your essays weren't too bad: Here is some extracts of what you said that I intend to send to the company :
« The actor who played J. Merrick ( Elephant Man) was very good because it’s hard to play a character like that »
« I thought the guy who played him was very good and he succeeded to make me understand the pain of his character very well »
« … something I disliked : it was about Princess Alexandra who was too much caricatural …. »
« »The woman who played Dr Treves’s wife was very good! She played like I imagined it ... »
« About the performance, I think it was very good and I liked it very much. The performance of the actors was good too. But I didn’t like the performance of the actress who had the character of the Princess. It was very funny but too caricatural. »
« The actors tried to make the play more funny with Tom Norman. In the film he is the bad guy without remorses , but in the play, he’s more fun, he’s a bit friendly... »
« So I found this play very good. Short, but good ... »
« The play was not very difficult to understand…. »
« I disliked the moment of the play when J. Merrick died ... »
« In fact, it’s a tragic story, but some scenes were funny… So, it wasn’t sad . »
« The Princess was a bit ridiculous but she was very funny! »
« It was very different from the image I had, but it was good . »
« And I was happy because I understood all the play. »
« J. Merrick was well represented and the actor who played him was really perfect. »
« I found the set funny, I enjoyed to see how the actors changed it in front of us. We realized that they didn’t need a lot of cupboards and desks and chairs to make a good set . »
« In my head I imagined Tom Norman was more violent, more dark. »
« I loved the scene when Mr Merrick told: » Doctor, I thank you very much.. » It was very beautiful …. «